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I'm doing this for my studies! More pages will follow <:
It's the first time for me doing a doujinshi!
Is it understandable? Is the English okay? Is it too much on one page? Is it okay???
Criticism is desired! xD
Reading is from right to left!
Done with Manga Studio EX 4.0
Cover & Page 1:
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
My Facebook Page
It's the first time for me doing a doujinshi!
Is it understandable? Is the English okay? Is it too much on one page? Is it okay???
Criticism is desired! xD
Reading is from right to left!
Done with Manga Studio EX 4.0
Cover & Page 1:
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
My Facebook Page
Image size
1507x2098px 1.75 MB
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Looks like black has been demoted to lineart & text duty Must take ages to draw the shapes first and then masking the patterns.
Also I think "if it's gonna taste good to him" sounds a wee bit German, "whether he'll like it" should do the job just fine.
Also also between the large BOOM (+its explosive background), the black mushroom cloud, the cut off character and the next panel cutting into this one, this second-to-last panel looks kinda crammed. Nice job otherwise tho, looking forward to the next page!
Also I think "if it's gonna taste good to him" sounds a wee bit German, "whether he'll like it" should do the job just fine.
Also also between the large BOOM (+its explosive background), the black mushroom cloud, the cut off character and the next panel cutting into this one, this second-to-last panel looks kinda crammed. Nice job otherwise tho, looking forward to the next page!